The garden, a lovely, wonderful place of joy, but this garden is a bloody war zone. The allies were the humans, who were picking their strawberries, and the enemies were the birds. Suddenly the birds swooped down and attacked the strawberry plants with their ferocious golden sharp beaks, munching away on the strawberry juice. The adults had to act fast before the dirty birds munch away all of the strawberry plants. The adults fought back with sticks and stones which were working, the birds were getting scared so they flew back into the dreadful forest filled with dark mysterious creatures.
Hello Tane,
ReplyDeleteYour use of descriptive words helps build the scene in your story. Not a lovely place of joy, the strawberry patch has become a battleground between hungry birds and humans. Only quick, forceful action finally chased off the birds.
You have made good use of the prompt and have taken care with spelling and punctuation. I see you managed to keep your entry to exactly 100 words. I also, at times, write to word limits and, like you, enjoy the extra challenge of writing the exact number of words. Well done. :)
I hope you keep entering the 100WC.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Thank you for replying and i know ill defiantly be visiting your blog soon :)
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