The gate is rusty from the rain because it gets wet like the house on fire and so like if I’m in the house and on fire it won’t be cool because I will be in danger because I will in the house when it’s on fire I’m properly going to get save from the fire people it will be cool because I will get saved from the fire man but it was cool because I did not have to get to the hospital it would not be good.
Gate was old and I felled scare me. I feel sad.
Well done Seth, I like your decision to write about a house on fire, which you use as a comparison with the rusty gate. You have used information about firemen and their jobs to make an interesting interpretation of this week's prompt.
ReplyDeleteA way that you could make this even better is to add some more full stops in.
Keep up the good work!
Kayleigh (Team 100WC)