“Quick this way, we’ll try and lose him in here”
“Ohh why does it have to be a graveyard, I told you not to steal”
“YOU BOYS BETTER GET BACK HERE YOUR MESSING WITH THE WRONG NIGHTGUARD!!!”
The rusty gate creaked open as we ran through like mad men possessed.
My breath was low and we had to stop, the night guard was coming, and he was coming fast. It was over he had us.
‘You’re in for it now, lucky for there’s some freshly dug holes waiting for you, is there any last words to put on your gravestones!!”
This was a really good story. Your use of vocabulary and speech made this very exciting to read. I could feel their panic as they ran. To have created this emotion in just a few words is very clever. Well done!
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