Monday 15 July 2013

100wc

As I was scrolling down the page on my Facebook page there were photo's of my cousin on the field at her school. still looking for pictures, there was knock at my door. On my way to open the door  there was no one there and it happened to the same thing to my next door neighbour, and the old lady was angry. In fact she was so angry she blamed her two kids, they still did it and made the lady   called the coops. And  now there parents will not let them go anywhere.

1 comment:

  1. Great to see you continuing to keep up with your writing during the school holidays Lesieli. This is a very interesting story and sounds like it is something that could of happened in real life... has it?

    Remember, as always with your writing you need reread your work and check for any mistakes. Think to yourself, "Does this makes sense to the reader?"

    Again good to see you writing and the first to publish during the holidays.

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