The rusty gate creaked by the black alleyway. I was lost in a haunted town
“ahhh”
I fell down a trap! It was fully dark all I could see was red eyes. My heart was beating!! I heard footsteps coming towards me I saw a ladder in the corner. I ran to the ladder I slithered up. But I was still in the trap I was still lost I still couldn’t see. for a second I thought I was in another world felt dizzy I woke up my eyes blinking the next thing I knew it was all a dream.
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ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely story, well done. I like the way you started the story and then to finish it as a dream is very good. You have made good use of punctuation, keep up the good work.