The train was cruising along, when the day turned into night, as the train entered the tunnel, the train was picking up speed.
It was strange because the tunnel went for a long time, until a glowing light flashed like a bolt of lightning .it was so sharp it almost blinded me.
It was strange because a whole bunch of pictures started too appeared on the wall.
When we came out of the tunnel, the train turned in to brighter colors and it felt a whole lot faster, it’s like we went in to the future, “no it couldn’t been”…
Hi Jessie. I like your 100 word challenge piece this week because you choose such lovely vocabulary to tell your story. I particularly like 'when the day turned into night' and 'it was so sharp it almost blinded me'. Description like this makes it so interesting for your readers - well done and keep entering!
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