MY first time man hunt in the dark. I started counting down, 20 19 18 17… 3 2 1, I turned my back quickly and faced nothing but evaporating light, “ready or not here I come”, as I announced to my friends, I crept through the archway my eyes glooming into darkness, I heard movement coming from the other side of the house, I sneakily trudged to the other side of the creepy house, I slowly slithered past the tall lonely door, the rusty gate creaked noisily as I stepped into the wicked house, “got you ,” as I shouted.
Good description in your writing. I like that you left the prompt words till the end
ReplyDeleteHi Teata,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good piece. You used punctuation extensively. Well done!