BANG BANG….
“What was
that?” Tina asked sleepily
“I’m not
sure” I mumbled.
BANG BANG BANG.
“Let’s go
check it out” Tina whispered excitedly
BANG BANG
BANG.
“Sounds
like there’s someone up stairs” I whispered.
BAN- and then the noise stopped……
“I can’t
hear it anymore” Tina whispered softly.
The door
slowly creaked open…..
“RAHHHHHHHH!!!”
“AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH”
Tina and I leaped off the bed and scrambled under it.
BANG BANG.
I looked
over the top of the bed and saw my little brother sitting on the floor banging a
pot and pan together. “Joey” I said sighing relief.
BANG BANG.
I tried to comment on your 100WC last week Shayla but it didn't work, so I'll try again! I enjoyed your writing, the repetition of the Bang sound almost gave it the feel of a poem. Great effort! Ms Maddison, Ireland - Team 100WC.
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