Friday 31 October 2014

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Once upon a time there was a family going fishing on a big green river. But suddenly the boat crashed into a big rock oh-nooooo they said the boat is broken. But their cat started swimming across the river to go and get help.

30 minutes later the search and rescue team arrived they climbed out of the boat and got lifted by the rescue team but luckily they survived. You’re a good cat said the family in execution there is no better cat ill have then you but luckily they were saved and they returned home in happiness.

1 comment:

  1. Thomas, it is very important that you look closely at you sentence structure and that you check your full stops and comers.

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